Great looking funny stuff.
Really fantastic style of animation, the lip syncing was perfect. The ending was really funny too, reminded me of Happy Harry's sudden violent endings.
I couldn't help but see the funny side of a professional flash animator complaining about someone else being boring.
small scale, great storytelling.
Its not generic newgrounds, which is always rewarding, although perhaps not literally for the artist.
The line based style of animation was simple, not very original but the rusty texture used through-out made everything look a lot more professional and interesting. But at the same time I found it a bit intrusive and even distracting towards the start, especially during a panning scene. Maybe thats something you should keep an eye out for in the future if you use the same rusty texture.
Great whole story, and the title brings everything together at the end really well. I look forward to seeing you become one of newground's greats.
Probably...
...better than most things everywhere.
Live action plus animation is always appreciated. Well done!
Really Fun And Smooth
Can't believe you're only 15 and you're creating films as smooth and finished as this. Great work, you really utilized the features Flash provides, this is the kind of animation that would be near impossible on paper. Keep it up perhaps you should mix live action into your next project I can imagine it working well.
Simple yet fantastic
If you're looking for ways to improve for the sequel I would suggest a better colour scheme. If you find that kind of thing hard its sometimes easier to take colour schemes from nature, for example look: the colours of rust, or the colours of the sky, so that all the colours compliment each other.
Apart from that I loved everything. The timing and the facial expressions felt very professional and natural. I could imagine seeing parts of this as animated shorts on TV, keep it up.
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